欅句会 2016.08 ― 2016/08/02
８月の兼題は睡蓮とビール。睡蓮と言えばマネの絵を直ぐ思い浮かべる。考えることは皆同じか、睡蓮の句を検索するとマネを詠みこんだ句が山ほど出てくる。マネするわけにはいかないと思って作っては見たが、矢張りから振りでした。頂いたのは、UFOさんの未草。何処かでそういう光景に出合った様な気がする一句でした。睡蓮の事を何故、未草と言うのか解らなかったが、ある人の選評で睡蓮の花は未の時刻（１３～１５時）に開くからとか。初めて知りました。それからすると、もう一句頂いたＦＷＪさんの睡蓮の花が鳥の声に目覚めるというのは、有りえぬか。
ビールの句は５句作り、一番出来が良いと思った句とＹＤＳさんしか採らないと思った句を提出。だが、自信満々の句は１点も入らず、ＹＤＳさんしか採らないと思った句は先生の選にも入りました。
ビール乾す 日米通算 二百勝
私が頂いたビールの句はＦＷＪさんの山頂で飲むビール。経験したものでないと解らない味で、本日の特選５句の一句。
そして、ＫＫＴさんの泥酔の火蓋。男の句と思ったのに一番若い下戸の女性の句とは意外。
兼題で３句あてたので当期雑詠は２句。一句は当たれば儲けものと川柳の様な冒険句を出したが、やはり外れ。もう一句は句会に行く途中浮かんで、会場で差し替えた一句。
両国の 花火と消える 千代の富士
一昨日、大横綱の千代の富士が膵臓癌で６１歳の若さで他界した。それを偲んで出した句でタイミングの良さか、先生を含む５人の方に採って頂きました。
当期雑詠で採って頂いたのは３句。
ＵＦＯさんの合歓の花は故郷に向かう途中の景色のリフレインの使い方が巧妙で本日の特選５句の一句。
ＨＤＹさんの墓洗うは遠方に墓がある人の心情を表していました。
ＫＫＴさんの大花火は湖上の花火の豪快さを表していました。
５句の中に入れようか最後まで迷った句がＦＷＪさんの川とんぼ、ＩＯＴさんの未草、先生の鬼やんま、ＵＦＯさんの黒揚羽。その内の２句が本日の特選５句の一句に選ばれたのだから、選句力まだまだと痛感。
ついでに今朝の日本海俳壇に下記の句が入選した一句を。
椋誠一朗選 大山の 肩に乗りたる 雲の峰
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