欅句会 2015.032015/03/03

 兼題は卒業と啓蟄。卒業なんて50年近く前の事。忘れてしまって出来るものかと思ったのですが、作り始めると昨日の事の様に思い出し、何句か出来てしまった。その内の一句を選んで出句した。

       赤点も 下駄履かせられ 卒業す

 我々の世代は授業料が高騰し始めた頃で、後には団塊の世代が控えていた。安い授業料の学生はさっさと卒業させ、高い授業料の学生を入れた方が得策とばかり、余程の事が無い限り卒業させられ気がする。句会に来ている人はほとんどまともに卒業したらしく、一点でした。
 私が頂いた卒業の句は二句で、何方も小学校を詠んだものと思われるが、一つはHBMさんの卒業写真。もう一つはIOTさんの過疎の村。何方の句も懐かしさが込み上げて来る様な句でした。

 啓蟄は取り合わせで行くしかないと思い、冒険してみました。

       啓蟄や 納戸の奥に 春画あり


 終活で実家の小道具や本を整理しているのだが、押入れの奥に春画の画集を見付けた。姉に聞いてみると父が航海の徒然に模写したものらしい。本物を見た事はないが、素人目には判らない。父と祖父の絵心のDNAが私にはまったく伝わらなかったのが無念だ。春画を詠んだので女性からは無視されるだろうと思ってたが、先生を含む男性二人と女性一人に採って頂きました。然も女性からは選評まで頂きました (^o^)
 私が頂いた啓蟄の句はUFOさんの虫の名を並べた句。そのユニークさに女性の句とは思わなかった。

 当期雑詠で採って頂いたのは二句。一つは卒業で50年近く前の事を思い出していたら、和服の女性とデートしてた時の光景を思い出し

       雛市や 逸れし人の 後ろ帯

 もっとも当時は横顔しか見ておらず、どんな帯してたか、まったく覚えてませんが。

 後の一句は歳時記をみてたら片栗の花は二月の季語で、万葉集では堅香子(カタカゴ)と呼ばれていたと知り

       かたかごや 大垂髪を 吹かれおり

堅香子の花

 片栗の可憐な花弁を見ていると、雛人形の御姫様の髪型、大垂髪(オスベラカシ)に見えて来て、それなら片栗より堅香子の方が相応しい。しかし、歳時記は平仮名で書いてあるので平仮名にしましたが、苦労のかいなく二つとも一点止まり。

 私が頂いた当期雑詠の句はUFOさんの二月。UFOさんの見た橋は何所の橋だろう。私は伯太川に架かる橋を思い浮かべたのだが。
 先生の帰雁は12点の高点。今日の出席者の7割が評価したのだ。全国紙に載るのが楽しみ!
 MSTさんの佐保姫は私しか採らなかったのですが、MSTさんの見た寝釈迦山は阿蘇だろうか、嵩山だろうか?
 たぁさんの桜餅はそれを見詰める表情の表現が何とも言えません (^_^)

コメント

_ UFO ― 2015/03/03 14:58

兼題・雑詠と選んでいただき有難うございました。今回は忙しくて適当に作ったので、誰もとってくれないことを覚悟して臨みましたので、出だしから朗然さんが取ってくださり、ホッとしました。
啓蟄というとすぐに石の下に隠れているゴミムシ、ワラジムシの姿を思い浮かべます。橋は甲川、羽田井のあたりの橋ですが、木だったかコンクリートだったか。二月の川面がキラキラしていた印象です。

_ 朗然 ― 2015/03/03 17:59

UFOさんの句は5句の内、4句ノミネートしてました。
適当に作って、特選が捕れるのですから、UFOさんの適当は本来の意味の適して当を得てる事を表しているのですね。
甲川ですか。上流と下流はある程度、行った事がありますが、中流はまったく知らないですね。今度、寄り道してみます。

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