欅句会 2015.022015/02/03

 今月の兼題は菠薐草(ホウレンソウ)と春一番。
 我々の世代はホウレン草と言えばアニメのポパイを見て育った時代なのでそのイメージから抜けられない。ポパイでは芸が無いのでオリーブと思ったのだが駄目でした。
 私が頂いたのはNYNさんの御浸し。先生も採られたのですが、料理法が余りにも普通なのが災いしたのか2点止まり。
 菠薐草で一番点の入ったのはUFOさんの句で料理をしない私には解らなかったが、宝石に見立てたのは流石です。

 春一番は新しい季語。キャンディーズの歌で世間に広まった様な気がする。そんな句を出す心算でいたが、直前になってサラリーマン川柳風の句に替えてみた。

       春一番 人事の噂 吹き荒れし

 春一番が吹く頃は会社内で人事異動の噂がまことしやかに飛び回り、内示を貰うまでは不安な日々を過す事になる。そんな職場の雰囲気を経験した人が多かったのか6点の高得点を頂きました。
 私が頂いたのはNKMさんの異国の春の来る前の嵐を表したもの。スケールの大きな句で先生も含め4点。そして、MMTさんの句は冬から春へ向う乙女心を表していると思いました。
 春一番で一番点の入ったのはHDYの竹林の様子を詠んだ句で10点以上の高得点でしたが、何故か先生の撰に漏れてました。

 自由題で私が今年に課した課題は句集を出すならば必ず詠まねばならない季語の雪月花と恋歌。遥昔のワンシーンを思い、その二つに挑戦した冒険句です。

       降る雨に 山は雪ねと 言いし君

 一般撰は2点でしたが、何と先生の特選5句の一句に選ばれました。冒険したかいがありました。そして、雪月花には入らないかも知れないが

       雪掻きを 終えて一服 志野茶碗


 志野茶碗が利いてか、先生の撰にも入って4点。合計13点は昨年の正月以来以来の高得点。でも合計点ではUFOさんやHDYさの方が遥かに上。

私が頂いた自由題の句は
 Guriさんの風邪。私も先月はそれで家に篭って居ましたから。でも、それで句作りに専念出来ました。
 SKMさんの蟹。蟹を食べる時はどんなお喋りも寡黙になりますね。
 DTTさんの鴨。毎日、家の前で見ているとこんな詩的な表現は浮かびません。そして、特選5句の一句の山眠る。DTTさんの句と知り、奥秩父や甲斐の山々を思い浮かべました。


 明日は立春、庭のチューブの芽も顔を覗かせ、蕗の薹も膨らんで来ました。

コメント

_ DTT ― 2015/02/04 14:56

山眠るの句についてですが、今年越後湯沢にスキー行った時に授かったものです。
後で、どこの山々なのか調べましたら、越後山脈の連なりでした。
神々しい景色でした。
背景のお知らせです。

_ 朗然 ― 2015/02/04 17:38

そうですね。越後湯沢のロープウェイで登った所の景色は峰々が連なっていますね。
スキーですか。昔は毎年出かけましたが、平成に入ってからは一度も行ってません (-_-;)

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