欅句会 2014.122014/12/02

 12月の兼題は年賀状に添える一句と熱燗。熱燗は兎も角、11月に年賀状に添える一句を詠む気にはなれない。毎年見る新年の景色を思い浮かべながら

       見慣れたる 景色を拝む 初山河

と詠んで出したのだが思いもせぬ5点の高得点。しかも、採って頂いた方々に選評まで頂きました。先生の撰には初め入っていなかったが、後で見逃したと言って補欠入選しました。
 私が頂いた年賀の句はHSAさんの去年今年。上五、中七、下五それぞれに去年今年と同じ様な言葉のリズムがあり、中七が8文字になってはいましたが、頂きました。他に頂いたのは先生の悪筆、MTNさんの賀状、NKMさんの喜寿の春、TGSさんの実南天。

 熱燗は面白い句が沢山有り、私の句は埋没してしまいました。特に女性方の句が意外で面白かった。私が頂いたのは、本日の特選句になったYWHさんの本心。5点の内4点が男性という事は酒の上の男の話を解る人が採ったと言う事か。他に頂いたのはMSTさんの名優の死を悼む句。

 当期雑詠の一つは、ウォーキングの途中で見た、えぇ!と思った光景を句にしたものです。

       ベランダに 並ぶ美脚や 掛大根

 先生を含め5点の高得点を頂きましたが、俳句では無く川柳だとの声もありました。点を頂いたのは後一句。

       冬の雨 静寂破る 能鼓


 先月の初め、能を初めて観る機会を得て、小鼓を叩く音が思いの外、大きくてその思いを詠み、先生の撰に入れて頂きました。年賀の句と熱燗で7句選んでしまい、他の人の当期雑詠を頂く枠が無くなってしまいました。

 最後に今朝の日本海俳壇に入選した句です。

       紅葉且つ 散る長年の 戦跡

 名和長年の船上山の古戦場の紅葉を詠んだのですが、家内を始め俳句をしてない人には読めないと不評の様でした。



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