八月の欅句会2011/08/02

 今月の兼題は向日葵と心太。

 ヒマワリは子供が小さい頃は庭によく植えた。早く大きくなってと願う気持ちからだろうか。植えなくなったのは小学校何年生頃からだろうか。

向日葵


     向日葵や 幼き子供 居りし頃

 トコロテンは妻の夏の夜食です。私が寝る前、居間に降りると啜っている。何をかけているかと云うと

     酢の好きな 妻のすすりし 心太

 2句共、選句されず。やはりな (^_^;


 私の夏の定番メニューは冷奴。しかし、結婚40年近くなっても豆腐の好みはお互い妥協しない。したがって

     絹木綿 夫婦別々 冷奴

 受け狙いもあったが、今回一番の自信作。笑いの中で、先生を含め4人に撰ばれた。しかし、その内訳は男は4人中3人女性は10中1人、しかも一番若い人。この意味するところは何か?


 先日、清水寺に行ったら蝉時雨の中、読経が行われていた。太鼓の音が何時になく気合が入っていた。

     蝉時雨 負けじと叩く 経太鼓

 読経の太鼓だと気付いてくれるかなと思ったが、先生を含め4人に撰ばれた。

 この時期、青田が海の様に見え、風が吹くと青田にさざ波が立つ。大山をみると緑の海原に浮ぶ島の様です。

青田波

     名峰の 裾を洗いし 青田波

 この景色を多い浮かべた人が多く、先生を含め5人に撰ばれた。実を言うと、句会にはこの句ではなく別の句を出す予定でした。ところが、今朝の新聞の日本海俳壇に掲載されていたので、急遽この句に変更しました。新聞に載ったのは

     アーケード とりて行き交う 夏燕

 昨年より、老朽化したアーケードの撤去が始まった。撤去が完了した商店街を歩いている時の光景を句にしたものです。

 今日の句会で、先生の詠んだ落し文の句が話題となった。落首と思った人とか、落紙と見間違えた人とか。私も一度しか見た事がないので、その写真を紹介します。
 私も6月からこの句作ろうと思っていたのですが、名前に惑わされて、うまくいきません。

落し文

 今日の6句の内、出句は5句。向日葵と心太は兼題故、外せない。残り4句の内、1句外すとすれば、貴方はどれを外しますか?

コメント

_ 2級建築士 ― 2011/08/02 20:45

絹木綿の一句、思わずビール吹き出しちゃった(笑)

季語はないが知り合いの晩飯の話をアイディアに一句参戦。

何か良い?聞くだけ聞いて、ホカ弁か…。

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/02 21:13

綾小路公麻呂の小話のようですね ^ ^

_ kanon ― 2011/08/03 10:58

名峯の 裾を洗いし 青田波

良い句ですね~~^^ 一票!

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/03 14:05

kanonさん、ありがとうございます m(_ _)m

自分では平凡な句と思ったのですが ^ ^

_ たかこ ― 2011/08/04 00:00

今回も楽しい句会でした。
向日葵と心太、難しかったですね。
結局私はむちゃくちゃな句しかできませんでしたわ。

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/04 08:40

マンションの句は良かったですよ。採るか否か迷って、先生の落し文の方を撰びました m(_ _)m

_ たかこ ― 2011/08/04 17:18

落し文はかわいい句でしたね!
写真アップしていただきありがとうございます。
ぜひとも実物を見てみたいです。

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/04 21:25

写真は3年前、先生と木谷沢を歩いた時、先生が見つけたもの。
先生か鷲山さんが一緒でないと見つけるのは、難しいかも。
落し文を見つける吟行も良いかも。

_ たかこ ― 2011/08/06 01:03

そうなんですか…
そうですよね、そんな簡単に見つかりませんよね。
先生の句と朗然さんの写真により、
実物を見たような気分にはなっているんですけど(^_^)v

_ たかこ ― 2011/08/06 01:24

追記:落し文吟行、いいですね。

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/06 08:29

写真喜んで頂いて嬉しいです ^ ^
先生と鷲山さんと木谷沢を歩けば、吟行ではなく、探鳥会になってしまうかも (^_^;

_ ゆず ― 2011/08/17 17:16

豆腐の句はあなただなと解りましたよ

_ 朗然 ― 2011/08/17 18:46

2年近く同じ句会で句を聴いていると、作者の見当が付くようになりますね。たまには句柄を変えてみますか。

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